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Thursday 21 August 2014

My wonderful weekend!

It was a beautiful morning ,the sun was shinning brightly upon us and there was not a single cloud in the sky.I felt happy that it was going to be a great day.

I had weet-bix for breakfast then I played Minecraft. All of a sudden I hear my cranky nana was yelling at my uncle Michael like a teacher growling at you.

I was in shock the he was yelling at him.I finished my chores quickly and that's when my baby cousin arrived they were greedy because they wanted everything .I was annoyed at them because they teased me ,took my things and they threw everything around.

After a little while, my mum told me that we were going to the movies. My baby cousin Andreas told me that I wasn't going because he always says that I'm not going. However I got ready because I didn't believe him.I
was so excited I couldn't stop moving.

After a little while,my Mum told me that we were going movies.My baby cousin and Andreas told me that I wasn't going because he always says that I not going.However I got ready because I didn't believe him I was so excited that I couldn't stop moving.

As soon we to the cinemas we went to the counter and paid for our tickets.Then we went upstairs waited in line.The line was as long as a snake and waited for ages until it started moving.

We went to the right numbered door for our movie I couldn't wait to watch it on the big screen.We went to our seats and the movie soon started after that we had some popcorn and ice cream it was yummy.

The movie was based on a adventure.I thought it was very cool,but my dad almost fell asleep.

When the movie was over ,we went to get MacDonald's and went home.

The beginning of the day wasn't that great because my cousins teased me but the rest of the day was good because I watched a movie that I like and at McDonald's.

WALT write a recount using similes and metaphors. 
Success criteria: I know this when I use similes and metaphors correctly in my writing.                                          

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